Week 3 Part A: Aesthetics, Design, and Branding
Gates N Fences
This website is full of problems. It is incredibly poorly
C.R.A.P.H.T.E.D..
The header is jarring and painful to read. There is very
little that is well contrasted. There is too much text.
They could leave the contact information at the bottom of
the page, or they could move the contact information to a separate contacts
page. The paragraph above the header and the paragraph in the header could be
moved into a sub-header section. The coloring could be more tied into the
background aesthetic. The text could be made to have a greater contrast so that
it is easier to read.
The links are a total mess. There are too many to be listed
completely in a column on a single page. Additionally, many of the links are
duplicated in a separate text box for additional links. More of them are
duplicated in the main body text. This makes it difficult to know if you are following
the correct link. It also makes it more difficult to read the page.
They could reduce the total links by removing the entire
duplicate links section. They could further reduce the total visible links by
collapsing each section into drop-down menus. Finally, remove the width-wise
highlighting from the link images; it makes them very hard to read.
There is too much text on the home page. The home page
should introduce your company and direct traffic. It shouldn’t be traffic.
There are links to each section, use them. Reduce or remove
the home page text. Increase the size of your images. Group the images with
appropriate text.
This website looks like their younger child helped their
parents make a website without really understanding anything about website
design or artistry.
Roverp6cars.com
The links along the side are atrocious. Link text should be
easy to read and condensed. There are far too many visible links on the page. Too
many links confuse visitors.
Reduce links into categories of drop-down menus if needed.
Otherwise have links direct to category pages and then direct traffic from there.
Don’t put links above images. Photo images reduce contrast and make text harder
to read.
There are too many unlinked images. Images on a website should
be grouped with text that define why they are there. It is often useful and
even customary to have the images be links themselves. Disjointed images make
websites hard to navigate.
They should reduce the total number of images and group them
with the appropriate text.
Contact information is haphazardly added throughout the
page. There is a shop link near the top. There are then links for different
part types. Next there is contact info; with no context or navigation. Later,
there is an email contact link. Then a Facebook link further down.
Contact info is one of the most important parts of a
business website. It needs to be easily accessible and unified. They should
have a link at the top to a contacts section, even if that is a jump link to
the bottom of the home page. They need to make sure to appropriately group
their contact info.
This website appears to be built by a car hobbyist rather
than a web design professional.
Artcenter.org
This website seems to be built by a professional.
The logo is clean and prominent, without being too much.
Links along the top of the page are clean and simple. Additionally, as jump links,
they make navigation easier and reduce loading speeds.
The main image shows what they are highlighting professionally
right now.
The navigation section is simple. Simple graphics and clean
text clearly identify where each link leads.
There is clean contrast and font selection. I’m not always a
big fan of mixing gray, white, and black on the same page, but in this instance
it lends a classic, cultured look to the main page that is a nice contrast to
the bright artistic main image.
The arts community has always had a contrast between bright
imagery and a classic feel; vibrant artists and wealthy benefactors. This feels
like art.
Headhunterhairstyling.com
This site is simple and clean. It feels basic, but with a
good understanding of design.
The logo is simple and prominent. The links are basic but clean.
Most of the colors seem well contrasted. I’m not a big fan of the gray tone for
the current page, but it isn’t terrible. The simple video simply and
effectively highlights what the page is for.
There isn’t too much on the home page. Header, video,
Callout, introduction, contact info. Clean and gorgeous.
I definitely feel that there is a clear level of
professionalism here. Not necessarily web development, but definitely design
professionalism. The site looks and feels like a cookie cutter website. The
design elements show someone that is well versed in graphic design and fashion.
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